Ethereal-dev: [Ethereal-dev] User's Guide V2.00 nitpicking

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From: Nicolas Kaiser <nikai@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, 18 Jan 2005 01:46:44 +0100
Lo,

I had a look at your User's Guide V2.00.
Please find below some nitpicking ;)
Best wishes to all who contributed to this
nice documentation. Keep up the good work :)

Cheers,
n.


V2.00 for Ethereal 0.10.5

1.4. A rose by any other name

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- The FAQ gives the official pronounciation as "e-the-real".
+ The FAQ gives the official pronunciation as "e-the-real".


2.3. Before you build Ethereal
Example 2.3. Errors while installing the libpcap include files

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- Most Linux systems will install GTK+ and Glib in anycase
+ Most Linux systems will install GTK+ and Glib in any case


3.4. The Menu

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File
- This menu contains tems to open and merge capture files
+ This menu contains items to open and merge capture files

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Tip!
- (or Strg in german)
+ (or Strg in German)


3.15. The "Packet List" pane

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-  Each line in the packet list corrresponds to one packet in the capture file.
+  Each line in the packet list corresponds to one packet in the capture file.


4.5. Filtering while capturing

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-  A capture filter takes the form of a series of primitive expressions connected by conjuctions
+  A capture filter takes the form of a series of primitive expressions connected by conjunctions


5.2. Open capture files
5.2.2. Input File Formats

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- Network General/Network Associates DOS-based Sniffer (compressed or unconpressed) captures
+ Network General/Network Associates DOS-based Sniffer (compressed or uncompressed) captures


5.3. Saving captured packets
5.3.2. Output File Formats

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- ".CAP" for Network Assosciates Sniffer Windows
+ ".CAP" for Network Associates Sniffer Windows


5.6. Printing packets

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Printer
- PostScipt specifies that the packet print process should use PostScript
+ PostScript specifies that the packet print process should use PostScript


6.3. Building display filter expressions
Table 6.4. Display Filter Logical Operations

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Substring Operator
- After a label you can place a pair of brackes []
+ After a label you can place a pair of brackets []


8.7. Service Response Time

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Note!
-  (or only sligthly different)
+  (or only slightly different)


Appendix A. Configuration Files and Folders

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ethers
- The digits of hardware addressses are separated by colons
+ The digits of hardware addresses are separated by colons


Appendix B. Protocols and Protocol Fields

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- Distributed Checksum Clearinghouse Prototocl
+ Distributed Checksum Clearinghouse Protocol


C.6. text2pcap: Converting ASCII hexdumps to network captures with text2pcap

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- text2pcap can read hexdumps withmultiple packets in them
+ text2pcap can read hexdumps with multiple packets in them


C.7. idl2eth: Creating dissectors from Corba IDL files with idl2eth
C.7.3. How to use idl2eth

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- To use idl2eth to generate an ethereal dissector from an idl file use the following proceedure:
+ To use idl2eth to generate an ethereal dissector from an idl file use the following procedure:

- Proceedure for converting a Corba idl file into an ethereal dissector
+ Procedure for converting a Corba idl file into an ethereal dissector

2.
- If you dont want to use the shell script wrapper, then try steps 3 or 4 instead.
+ If you don't want to use the shell script wrapper, then try steps 3 or 4 instead.